The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a fabulous piece. I love your conclusion the most.
01/28/07
What a rich read this was! I could picture Thomas Kinkade painting to your words. I loved this and doubt you will be in this category for long.
01/28/07
Wow! I loved the way you showed both the thoughts of the artist and the beautiful scene. Very well done.
01/29/07
Your strong point is in your description. Well done - keep at it.
01/29/07
Absolutely amazing description! You have a real way with words, and I agree - I can't imagine you'll be in beginners for long.
01/30/07
This is lovely and atmospheric, very nicely done. I'm pretty sure the 3rd word should be "shone", something that you might want to check if you submit this piece elsewhere. (I could easily be wrong). There's lot of rhythm and movement in this piece, and great serenity. Very nice.