The Official Writing Challenge
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01/25/07
Very sweet and moving. This would be an easier read if you divided it into paragraphs a bit. Thanks for sharing this wonderful moment!
I thought this was a touching story. I also think it would flow better with paragraphs, but you did a good job!
01/26/07
Lovely story - I agree, could have done with paras to break it up a little, but it read very well.
01/27/07
I agree with your other comments. I could see the scene clearly; how precious those drawings must be!
01/30/07
Great memories for all us Moms. A child's art is forever etched on a mother's (and a father's) heart. Thanks for reminding me in a short, concise way. Showing your memories produces more impact that telling. Keep writing!