The Official Writing Challenge
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Your hand held a paintbrush when you wrote this! A beautiful inspirational portrait to the believer in God. A loving but powerful validation of the Truth and glory of God to the agnostic.
The reader's eyes and heart are captivated from beginning to end. Excellent!
01/27/07
Your descriptions are lovely and this expressed your views clearly. I loved the part about caribou stew and pizza; what a culture clash! Good job
01/28/07
This piece was art to me, appreciated, beautiful, and wanting more.
01/29/07
You made your point very beautifully. But I will admit to being a bit unhappy with the word 'natives'. It has negative connotations which I'm sure you're not implying but might disturb the reader.
01/31/07
You make me long to visit Alaska. Great description and I also liked the pizza and caribou combo.