The Official Writing Challenge
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01/18/07
Isn't it funny how life intrudes when you get an idea and want to write? Good job at conveying that real-life frustration of every writer.

Your last paragraph was a good wrap-up of the entire experience.

Need I say it? Keep writing!
01/18/07
Witty and readable, with a great voice.

A few mechanical things to clear up--notably comma usage.

This has great potential; I really enjoyed your wry humor.
01/18/07
Very cute and clever - love the last paragraph too.
01/18/07
Your story took me on a journey I have experienced, albeit a different path, with the same ending conclusion. Thanks for articulating how our great ideas are not always in sync with God's and that in the end what matters most.
01/19/07
I can so relate to your frustration and enjoyed your amusing account of your unfinished novel. This is an amusing story and I liked it very much.
The last line made me giggle! I wasn't expecting it. I liked the progressional account throughout each day. This was very good. Keep it up!
01/24/07
This was great. Original, I loved the Tylenol cocktail line best of all.