The Official Writing Challenge
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01/18/07
Your best sentence was Enclosed you will find my empty pages and my empty heart. This was so genuine, so real!

The Lord's letter in reply was very loving, but seemed to lack the intensity of feeling that your narrator's letter to Him had. Maybe a more back-and-forth correspondence, with shorter replies, would give you the opportunity to give Him more depth?

This is very nicely done.


Your idea was unigue and i loved the accounts of great Christian writers.Anice job. Definitely keep writing!

P.S. I experience your character's longing for God's inspiration everytime I write. I can relate to the desire to have Him write through her!