The Official Writing Challenge
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01/18/07
Much-needed exhortation to action here!

The unclear pronoun usage in the 2nd paragraph forced me to re-read a few times; it almost seemed as if you were fighting FOR the adult-oriented businesses.

Nice essay--I liked it.
01/20/07
A very good essay and a very good expression of your beliefs. It is a well-expressed call to action.
01/24/07
Yes, we must speak out. I loved the quote at the end.