The Official Writing Challenge
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This is deep and powerful--I love it!
What a great title! I love the opening paragraph/verse and your descriptions. Wonderful writing here!
Great title, wonderful piece!
Exilarating! "For love and not control, motivated every stroke of your pen across the pages of my pre-ordained life." This is a powerful statement of His truth. I love this line, "Before the day and the night met and kissed beneath evenings shade." This is a wonderful word picture!
I wanted to let you know I was one of the judges for this week, and I thought your poem was exceptional. I was surprised to find such a wonderful gem in the beginner's section!