The Official Writing Challenge
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01/18/07
Beautifully written story--it haunted me and the rapture situation caught me by surprise! Vivid imagery--Ryan, along with her world, seems real.

It would be easier to read with spaces between paragraphs.

The title grabbed me--I like titles with personal names in them because they make me curious about the names' owners. Great job!
01/19/07
I love the feel of this story - and the way you lulled us into the rapture. Your mechanics and descriptons were great! The suspense was perfect. Good job!
01/20/07
This one stunned me--what a great story!
01/23/07
wow. Makes me want to grab my pen, paper, a new document, a Napkin, something, anything to write on and Write!! Great twist to make us think and spur us to action! Good job & thanks!
01/23/07
Gave me chills.Well done!