The Official Writing Challenge
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01/18/07
Nice - I appreciated your thoughts!
01/18/07
Great job!
01/20/07
Loved the title, and the story told in rhyme.

Work a bit on finding a more consistent meter in your poems--it will give them better flow and make them easier for your readers.

I really appreciated your approach to this week's topic.
01/23/07
I liked this poem. Little awkeward in a few places, but still good reading.