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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Writing (01/11/07)

TITLE: Writing for HIM
By Becky Depp
01/14/07


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My hand moves a crossed the soft paper,
The ink from my pen bleeds through
I'm writing down my thoughts
I daily think, about you.

I write about my love to you
How sweet and sensitive you are,
How we talk everyday, at all times
And when I need you, you are not far.

My Lord, Jesus! How I love you so
You love me, forgive me, and heal me
Yet I’m not perfect as you are
I can't live up to you, I must agree.

You gave me my gift of writing
Although you come first in my heart
I thank you for everything you've done for me
And I hope we shall never part.

My life, and everything I do is in your hands
And for that, my writing is dedicated to you
Because I trust you completely
You are my life forever an ever, this I say is true.

Now I close my book for the day,
And I say a quick prayer to you
I thank you, once again, for everything
I tell you that I love you, but this is far from Adieu.


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Julie Arduini01/18/07
What a wonderful read!
Amy Michelle Wiley 01/19/07
I really enjoyed this. The first verse was my favorite. Good job!
Jan Ackerson 01/20/07
What a lovely poem to your Savior!

Consider changing the title to "Writing for You", since the poem is all addressed to Christ. And be careful of confusing "a crossed" with "across."

You have some very nice words and images here.
Joanne Sher 01/21/07
I especially love your first stanza, Becky! Enjoyed this very much.
01/23/07
You did a good job with this. It has a lot of feeling in it. Well done!
Leigh MacKelvey01/24/07
Moving tribute to writing for Christ. You used ryming nicely! Good job, Becky
william price01/24/07
This was very inspiring. It moved me and encouraged me. Very anointed. Keep up the good work for Him! God bless.


   
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