The Official Writing Challenge
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01/18/07
You know it's a good work when you can picture the scene, and want more. Excellent job.
01/20/07
This is very sweet, and written skillfully.

Something to consider would be to add something unexpected--this covered familiar territory.

You really make your readers care about Jessica and Nathan, and cheer for their happy ending.
01/21/07
You made us feel their joy in receiving the letters. Good job!
01/23/07
Yay for the sweet newlyweds! A wonderful story and very heartwarming. Good job