The Official Writing Challenge
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01/19/07
This was well written - you painted a soft relaxing picture for me. I might have italicized the one part where you prayer - maybe - and I wish you had written more as it was good!:)
01/20/07
I love the way you set the scene in the first two paragraphs--very serene. Watch out for the spelling of "pane"--and do squirrels bark? All in all, a lovely piece of writing from the heart.
01/23/07
Short and SWEET! This was 'just right'. I loved the descriptions and feelings you encorperated. Noticed a typo, but Great job!