The Official Writing Challenge
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01/11/07
Very interesting facts on African cooking and baking processes! I enjoyed reading your article, but it would have been easier if you'd broken it up into paragraphs. It also could have used a bit of proofreading, but the information you shared was fascinating! :) Thank you!
01/11/07
Informative. I liked it, but have to agree that it would be easier to read with paragraphs. Keep the pen busy! Thank you.
01/12/07
Interesting!
Interesting facts, enjoyable to read. I hav e to agree, though, that it needed a bit more proofing prior to submiting.
Also, try putting spaces between the paragraphs as that helps with the ease of reading.