The Official Writing Challenge
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01/11/07
Enjoyable story and good reminder! thanks for sharing.
01/11/07
Interesting story with a good message about our food choices! It could use some proofreading to catch punctuation and sentence structure errors, but I enjoyed reading it and smiled at the surprising ending! :)
01/12/07
Great idea. I had to chuckle at the end. You do need to work on formatting and do some clean up. Good job and good work.
01/12/07
HA! I can relate to poor Kevin... maybe God's telling me something.