The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed your description of your rock-like first biscuits! :) You also gave us some excellent advice on cooking and baking!

There were a few "mechanical" errors in your piece, such as "pass" instead of "past" in one sentence and "would" istead of "who" in the phrase "I have an aunt would has said for years." These can be taken care of with some proofreading before submitting. Also, your ending was a bit abrupt, I thought, and might have been better if you'd had a summary or "wrap up" sentence at the close.

I enjoy cooking and baking, and I found your article interesting and informative. Thank you for sharing! :)
You gave a lot of useful information but you made it clear - from your title and your words - that cooking and baking are "arts" and can be used as such. Nice job.