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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Cooking or Baking (01/04/07)

TITLE: Bitter, Sweet Feather Bed
By Myrna Noyes
01/10/07


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Sarah lay quietly in her feather bed in one corner of the cozy living room while the sounds of her busy household hummed around her. She could hear her fourteen year-old daughter Edith clattering away in the back kitchen while scrubbing the lunch dishes, and she listened while twelve year-old Nellie blithefully practiced her latest lesson on the organ in the parlor across the hall. Her youngest, Walker, played happily in a nearby corner with the toy steam engine he and his brother had made out of tin cans. Sarah watched him for a few minutes and then turned away, sighing softly in frustration. Try as she might to hold it back, a bitter tear slipped down her cheek. She felt utterly useless.

For years she’d had a bad heart and was never able to do heavy housework like mopping floors and such, but most of the time that had not unduly bothered her. Her husband and four children pitched in to do the work she couldn’t, and she was very grateful for their help. Also, a woman came once a week and stayed all day to do the laundry.

However, Sarah was an excellent cook and seamstress, and felt she contributed much to the comfort and care of her family in these two areas. People said she could bake pies and cakes that would “melt in your mouth,” and she beautifully made all the family’s clothes. Using her dressmaking skills to sew for the townsfolk also enabled her to earn money to proudly send her eldest son Fred to college.

She derived much enjoyment and satisfaction from cooking, as well. The pastor of their church was a particular admirer of her culinary talents. He lived at some distance from the town and traveled there by train every weekend for the Saturday evening and two Sunday services. Most of the time he would stay at Sarah and Wilson’s home and take his meals there. After the Saturday night service when Sarah would shake his hand and say “Good-bye,” he would invariably reply, “Don’t say ‘Good-bye,’ Sister Smith. I’m going home with you.” Sarah felt so pleased and honored when the minister would say this and viewed it as a real compliment to her hospitality. She took great pains to fix extra-special, appetizing meals whenever he stayed with them. Baked pies and cakes, fried chicken, and an abundance of other tasteful foods graced their table on these occasions.

At times, though, her heart gave her more troubling physical problems, and the doctor ordered her to bed rest. This was one of those spells, and she chaffed vainly at her forced inactivity. She moved her head side to side restlessly on the pillow and picked carelessly at a loose thread on her coverlet. She closed her eyes and groaned quietly as she thought of her inability to minister to the needs of her family and to participate in the beloved household routines. As her family had the many other daily home tasks to do as well as tending to the large vegetable garden out back, Sarah had always done all the meal preparation herself, and now she worried that they would not eat properly. How would the bread get baked, who would cook the roast for dinner, who would get the vegetables ready?

Being a deeply religious woman who read her Bible faithfully every night before going to bed, an involuntary prayer escaped her lips, as she beseeched heaven with the plea, “What can I do, Father? What can I do?”

Slowly an inspiration formed, and a hint of a sparkle came into her eyes. Yes, she could manage that! Wasting no time, she called out to Edith to come to her bedside, while ideas jostled each other in her mind.

“Edith, pull up a chair and listen to me, please,” she urged. “I have a plan! I am going to teach you how to cook!”

Edith looked a bit skeptical, but Sarah continued, “ I will tell you what utensils, pans, and ingredients you need, and when you have gathered them, come back and set them here on my vanity table. I will then give you step-by-step instructions on how to bake some bread and how to fix today’s dinner.”

As Edith left with her list of items to get from the kitchen, Sarah settled back on her pillow, smiling contentedly. She wasn’t useless after all! Then, lifting her eyes to the sky outside her window, she simply breathed, “Thank you!”


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D. Phenes01/11/07
Great story, made me wish there was more..
Loren T. Lowery 01/15/07
I love stories that show us that when we feel dispair and that there is no way - that if we go to God - He will indeed show us a way.

Your story brought this out for me and I sincerely appreicated its message - and your writing!
Linda Cunningham01/15/07
I have to agree with another of the comments. This short story left me wanting more. (A good thing.)

You did a good job developing Sarah's character in a few sentences.
Jan Ackerson 01/15/07
Great job establishing a setting in this sweet story.
Sue Stone01/15/07
Good character development, and nice resolution of the problem at hand. I liked it a lot, and want to know more about Sarah!
Donna Emery01/16/07
A very sweet story and I was glad that Sarah found a way for her cooking to continue. Nice work!
Joanne Sher 01/17/07
I also loved how you set the scene in this, and your wonderful writing, especially of her inner thoughts. Great job!
terri tiffany01/17/07
Good developing of character - nice details throughout.:)
Catrina Bradley 01/17/07
This is just plain, good, writing! RE: "and traveled there by train" you might have said "here" instead of "there" since he is coming to town, where your MC is. I loved this story, and the encouragement and comfort she received. Great job!!!
Jacquelyn Horne09/05/07
Such a heartwarming story. Thank you.


   
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