The Official Writing Challenge
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01/11/07
Showed great creativity. I did not get the following sentence though: "I want to believe that after all that God’s the least they can show is some gratitude. Yet through all this he still loved them and never gave up on them "

Could be me but what is God's? Thanks for sharing
01/12/07
Very original, great lesson.
01/12/07
Great title and a very creative story! There were a few errors that proofreading would take care of, but I enjoyed reading your piece. Thanks for sharing! :)
01/15/07
An interesting concept. Very creative and I enjoyed this peek into a different sort of kitchen. Keep writing!
01/17/07
Very creative!! I was especially touched to read "I finally understood my Creator was...filled with love incomprehensible even to an angel..." Well said. Amen.
01/20/07
This was a refreshing read---didn't know what to expect next (I think a word or two got accidently dropped after "God's," at least that's how I read it). Thank you for commenting on my writing, too. I appreciate you.