The Official Writing Challenge
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01/11/07
I really enjoyed this story! I could feel for the little girl, especially when her mother scolded her. Was relieved to see the mother finally come around and end up understanding after all! Wonderful descriptions and dialogue!
01/11/07
How cute!thanks for sharing
01/12/07
This brought back a great memory as my sister and I tried something similar for our mom. A great read.
01/13/07
I thoroughly enjoyed this. you very adeptly captured the little girl's pov and I could empathize with her. well done!
01/15/07
A sweet little story and a lovely interlude. This was very heartwarming. Nice work.
01/15/07
O what a sweet story. It reminds me of my own wanting to do nice things for my mom...sometimes it worked out lovely, and sometimes, like this...and you caught that stumbling for love so well.
06/09/07
To God be all glories for this story!