The Official Writing Challenge
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Heart wrenching and descriptive. I could feel your pain. Well done. God bless you and your writing.
01/14/07
Oh, this brought tears to my eyes. I pray that the Lord will comfort your heart. This is well done.
01/16/07
I felt like I was there with you. When you reached for your tissue, I reached for mine, too....well written. Good job!
01/16/07
What a wonderful juxtaposition--the musical flute (which made me grin) with your narrator's grief. Great wordsmanship.
01/17/07
Very touching story! There were a few spelling errors that could be fixed with a little proofreading, but the story was well-told. I could see in my mind the lakeside setting with the evergreens and the campfire. Thanks for sharing this.
01/17/07
This was totally tactile and real - I can't imagine you'll be in beginners for long!!
01/18/07
Wonderful description and touching story.