The Official Writing Challenge
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01/11/07
This is a wonderful memory. Your love for God and his blessings are evident. You may want to reformat your work, butoverall, you did a great job.
01/13/07
This was very rich with memories. It's clear how much you care about Josh and how the memory of that special pizza helps to warm you with memories of Josh. I suggest that you separate your paragraphs in the future but it is a good story.
01/17/07
What a neat story! I loved the part with the frozen pizza and the contests! A good read. Just a tip-add more spaces next time to make for easier reading!