The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a wonderful memory. Your love for God and his blessings are evident. You may want to reformat your work, butoverall, you did a great job.
This was very rich with memories. It's clear how much you care about Josh and how the memory of that special pizza helps to warm you with memories of Josh. I suggest that you separate your paragraphs in the future but it is a good story.
What a neat story! I loved the part with the frozen pizza and the contests! A good read. Just a tip-add more spaces next time to make for easier reading!