The Official Writing Challenge
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hihihi ~~ i found this funny
01/17/07
Lol. Kinda funny. A few chuckles tucked in here and there. Just a tip-Next time put your author's notes together or make them bold using the codes in the FAQ. I thought at first that it was part of the story and had to reread it for everything to make sense. Otherwise, a good idea!
01/20/07
You are so readable! I have to come looking for you. I love the "aroma" angle of cooking and baking you wove through your article, here. I could go off on a tangent about the limbic system, and how important smells are to our memories. But, I like your home-style description, better. I can identify with it. Thanks for the enjoyment!
01/21/07
As usual, my friend, topnotch! And Lewis would be proud, (as you once told me). So happy when I see your name on the roster...and can't wait to read your frolics through life. You're wasting your talent in Beginners, but then, that's Your CHOICE...great job once again. Look forward to the next one! Each one only makes me want more, more, more...loved it Pauly!