The Official Writing Challenge
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01/11/07
This was well done on every level. I really enjoyed it.
01/12/07
Great dialogue--I could see and hear the mother and daughter cooking and talking together, and it reminded me of times with my grandma when I was growing up. However, I was confused by who was actually in the kitchen and when. It seemed that Jenna was suddenly there and speaking--with no mention of her entering the room. Also, is Diane Jenna's sister or mother? Was confused about that too. And what caused the "boom" in the next room??
01/12/07
I loved this! I have a 14 yr. daughter and sometimes I hear my mom in my head too!
Thank you
01/17/07
A sweet story with a lot of heart! I liked how you showed the generations of the family of mother-daughter cooking. The ending was my fave part :)