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01/11/07
I really liked it. It was thought-provoking to me that to follow Jesus doesn't always mean doing some highly important thing. Sometimes following Jesus can mean doing something ordinary like cooking.

Other than that, there was a sentence problem in I think your beginning paragraph, but to me that wasn't so big of a thing.

Good job!
01/11/07
This could be a devotional! Very thought-provoking and inspirational at the same time. Good job.
01/11/07
nicely done
I like this vey much.

Very well written, faith stirring, so true, and very very inspiring
01/11/07
This gave me pause to think and reflect on my own Christian life. Some of your sentences could be rearranged.

Good job. Great take on the topic.
01/11/07
Very thought provoking, and it's so true! We don't get together for meals enough! Very thought provoking.