The Official Writing Challenge
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01/11/07
I thought it was very well put together and I enjoyed reading it.
01/11/07
This is a very sweet thought. It was easy to read and flow was nice. You might want to do a twice over for spelling.

I'd love to see this as a devoitional with a verse attached. Great job.

01/11/07
i don't cook, but you made it sound almost inviting.
touching
I enjoyed this article and seeing that family came first.

Teresa
01/12/07
A wonderful story. I think we can all relate to the fact that if we would sometimes take to enjoy little moments life wouldn't always seem so mundane and overwhelming. Thank you for writing this.
01/12/07
Very sweet. I am not a parent, but it made me appreciate the effect children can have on your heart, especially the young.
01/13/07
You have some wonderful descriptions in here - I felt like I was right there. A few spelling errors, but definitely a good read!
01/15/07
Good job. I could sence the stress in the early paragraphs. As a parent, the message was convicting. Good tie in.