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04/11/05
Beautiful way to share a painful experience. The closer we are to our friends, the more they can cause us pain. That's why some people don't let people get close. We call those people, lonely. Glad to read this relationship had a happy ending.
04/11/05
Well done. The poem shares the heart and ache of friendship, but you bought the point of
forgiveness and mercy. I liked it.
05/04/05
I could see my own picture painted in these words. My heart still aches, and I still stand at the 2nd step of forgiving and waiting for my friend to come back.
Praize, glory and honor be to God, who reunites close friends.Amen.
God bless you and yours.