The Official Writing Challenge
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12/15/06
A nice story and a reminder that we all have the potential to reach out to others in His Name. Keep writing!
12/15/06
I appreciated the message contained in this piece! I also enjoyed your descriptive style in sentences such as, "She hugged herself, relief and pride knocking the fear from her eyes," and "'Of course,' she replied the same as if I'd asked her if she wanted cream with her coffee."

Your last line should be an encouragement to all "unsung servants": "Though we are not praised by human voices, our names shall be lifted up by the one true voice for all eternity." What greater reward could we ask for?