The Official Writing Challenge
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12/15/06
I didn't "get" who he was until half way through so kudos to you for your skillful storytelling. This was well done and I loved your spin on this. Keep writing!
12/15/06
It was very interesting to look at these events through Moses' eyes, and I agree that his mother was a very courageous woman. I love your last line, "Her bravery then means I can be brave now." You did a good job with this story! :)