The Official Writing Challenge
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12/14/06
What a sweet little story and a unique way to view the topic. This touched my heart. Keep writing!
12/19/06
What a nice story! I would loved to have heard more detail - maybe stretch it out abit with some dialogue about her struggles or her asking the teacher some questions. You have the basis for a very touching story here:)