The Official Writing Challenge
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12/16/06
This is a lovely concept and I have no doubt you will see it one day. I know you will be grateful forever for their prayers and support. Nice job on the story. Keep writing!
12/19/06
Very nice. You might want to consider dropping the several 'that'word as it would tighten it better and isn't really needed. Perhaps give a little story about how these friends made a differenc in your life too:) Keep writing!!