The Official Writing Challenge
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12/08/06
Wow! A powerful story of a two martyrs for our Lord. I love the way the title says many things about the story. A powerful testimony but I couldn't help wonder where or when the story was set. Well written.
12/12/06
Very touching story, and I liked how you connected the title and the last line together.

I noticed a few typos and punctuation problems, but these are easily remedied.
Also, I'm not sure what "skirted" means in the first parapgraph.

Overall, I enjoyed your story, and I thank you for sharing it with us!