The Official Writing Challenge
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Interesting! Way to leave the reader hanging. I'd love to know what happens next. You made me care about these kids and hope they have a happy ending. This may be a bit weak on topic, but I enjoyed the story and your writing. Nice job.
WOW! What a surprising twist at the end! You also used some excellent descriptive words and phrases! I would have loved to know what happened next, too! :)