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12/07/06
Beautifully written description of a priest's ministry to two very different and contrasting congregations. Great job in both comparing the two worlds and in having them finally connect in a meaningful way. I also liked the specific descriptions of individuals within the poor congregation. They sounded real!

Great message--and interesting title, too!
12/09/06
Super title and a great story. I love this priest's heart for God and his love for both of his congregations. I also love that he kept trying despite their passivity. Well done.
12/13/06
Wonderful story! Your descriptions and characterizations were excellent! I was glad to see that underneath their passive veneer, a spark of caring remained in the hearts of St. Bridget's congregation! :)