The Official Writing Challenge
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Great concept, powerful story. One or two little grammatical things - if you want more detaled critique PM me. I did enjoy this though, especially since I have just come from the death-bed of my friend's mother - who after a life-time of indifference chose to wear a cross around her neck for the last fortnight of her life. Thank you for speaking hope to me.
Very powerful and a wonderful witness of hope. It was hard to follow at times but its truth was evident and easy to understand. Good work.