The Official Writing Challenge
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I laughed out loud at this wry piece. I loved this - they look Chinese, we’re not sure what they are. Too true, all of it. Well done.
Great job!! Loved the way it was constructed and the ending especially. Watch you shift changes - I think you were present then past. Very nice writing:)
Very satirical story to which I laughed at it and also raised my eyes because it's so true that such expectations are put on pastors.

Might be good to watch your punctuation. I know that can be hard if you're in a hurry.
A funny story but with a lesson hidden inside. I enjoyed the ending. Nice work.
God bless the secretaries of the world! Our job is a very important one. Wonderful story. Loved the edited ad.
This is good. There is one thing I would rephrase, but since it's in quotation marks it's sort-of "allowed". The dialogue is very natural. (:
Very fun and clever! I definitely laughed several times. Love the edited ad (and the unedited one was just a hoot!).
Wonderful! Just loved it. I have no suggestions that haven't already been made, except to watch your punctuation. Very funny piece! Blessings, Cheri
This was fun, fun, fun. Thank you for writing it!