The Official Writing Challenge
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12/07/06
I laughed out loud at this wry piece. I loved this - they look Chinese, we’re not sure what they are. Too true, all of it. Well done.
12/08/06
Great job!! Loved the way it was constructed and the ending especially. Watch you shift changes - I think you were present then past. Very nice writing:)
Very satirical story to which I laughed at it and also raised my eyes because it's so true that such expectations are put on pastors.

Might be good to watch your punctuation. I know that can be hard if you're in a hurry.
12/10/06
A funny story but with a lesson hidden inside. I enjoyed the ending. Nice work.
12/12/06
God bless the secretaries of the world! Our job is a very important one. Wonderful story. Loved the edited ad.
This is good. There is one thing I would rephrase, but since it's in quotation marks it's sort-of "allowed". The dialogue is very natural. (:
12/13/06
Very fun and clever! I definitely laughed several times. Love the edited ad (and the unedited one was just a hoot!).
12/13/06
Wonderful! Just loved it. I have no suggestions that haven't already been made, except to watch your punctuation. Very funny piece! Blessings, Cheri
12/13/06
This was fun, fun, fun. Thank you for writing it!