The Official Writing Challenge
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A lovely story in this poem! How many people drift around our big cities longing to be gently called by name.
A lovely and touching story. The rhyming and meter were a bit inconsistent but it was a lovely poem all the same. You told a wonderful story and warmed my heart. Nice job.
Loved this pastor helping the homeless. The rhythm was very good, it just looks like you missed a few "enter's" I'm sure it's just me, but with the set meter, I was expecting a rhyming poem. Well done and great, moving story!