The Official Writing Challenge
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12/07/06
I loved this story--both the unusual title and the opening line drew me in. Great dialogue! The characters really came alive.
12/10/06
Your title drew me in, and your story kept me here! Great dialogue - it definitely felt completely authentic. Nice job!
12/10/06
I also loved the title and the characters seemed real to me, too. This pastor seemed like a real person to me. What a shame to have to fight over such "little" things but I know these are real issues in some places. Very good job writing an enjoyable story.
I can't believe there weren't more comments on this. Fun story! I love the title.