The Official Writing Challenge
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12/12/06
This is tender and beautiful. Does Opa mean something special? Is Opa related to the narrator? And is this a personal memory? It is told like it really happened. Blessings,
Cheri
12/13/06
Lovely! This definitely read very smoothly - and was very pleasantly conversational! I'm glad you threw a brick!
This is very sweet. I hope it's true. A few minor punctuation errors, but all in all, this is a well-written piece. Nicely done.
12/13/06
I love this! The way the baby relaxed and fell asleep when held in the Pastors arms was a beautiful picture. Well done!