The Official Writing Challenge
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True men of God, indeed. Your blessed! Thank you for the article, it's touching.
12/13/06
A great thank-you. Short but sweet. The first verse seemed a little out of rhyme though, maybe if they all sort of followed a rhythm, it would flow easier? Just a thought, good job!
12/13/06
Very well done. For myself I feel this could have been expanded better as a complete story. But the simple lines used worked quite well. Good job.