The Official Writing Challenge
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12/07/06
Good writing.
Keep up the good work.
The more you write the better it gets!
God Bless
12/08/06
This is a very good poem, but I think you could have broken it into stanzas, especially where you had the change at the end. Good thoughts, however.
12/13/06
Short but to the point and a great look at the other side of the story. Pretty good writing overall, but some spaces in between would add some more impact to it. Good title though. :)
12/13/06
Very nice message. I can appreciate all that goes into creating a poem. Keep up the good work. God bless.