The Official Writing Challenge
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12/01/06
Just beautiful! The happy ending brought a tear or two. Good job! I loved the dialouge between the characters :)
12/01/06
Oh, I love this. Beautiful!
12/02/06
Another Master in the work. Very well done, kept me pulled in and landed with a good finish. Good job.
I loved this story. It really touched my heart. Keep on writing.
12/06/06
Great story! :) I enjoyed your descriptive words and phrases and loved the surprise ending!