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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Volunteer (11/23/06)

TITLE: Super Girl
By Genstacia Bull
11/23/06


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“If you hate it so much why are you doing it” Anita glanced at her freshly polished pearl pink nails. She got up to lower the volume of her Mariah Carey CD.

“I don’t hate it! Have you listened to a word I said?” Janelle tightened the belt around her baggy jeans designed to hide her voluptuous figure.

“Of course, you work in church because you feel you need to ….. what was the word, ah –sow back you time into the ministry, I was listening to you Sis.” Anita pulled out her flat iron to touch up her shoulder length hair.

“I don’t even know why I am talking to you; it’s not like you will understand where I am coming from?” Janelle picked up her Macys shopping bags and started heading for the door.

“Wait up! Don’t go yet, I was going to ask you something. Girl could you help me baby sit the boys on Saturday night- that is if you haven’t got prayer meeting or something like that?”

“You know full well that Saturday is the only free night I have and in light of what you supposedly listened to, asking me to baby sit is just plain insensitive.”

“Okay, sorry I spoke. I guess I could ask Mama to help.” Anita said with a smirk on her face.

“Don’t! I will baby sit the boys, Mama need to rest to get her blood pressure down.”

“Oh thanks Sis you are the best little sister in the whole world” Anita ran up to Janelle and gave her a squeeze. She smelt of a Victoria Secret lotion.

Janelle wiggled herself free from her clutch “Well some of us have a lot more to do than pamper ourselves”

“You should try it some time, how about you come round next week and I’ll fix you a new hair style and even do your nails.”

“Thanks but I can afford to go to a salon to do that, besides I have to help Mrs. Wilson with her tax return next week.”

“Well Little Miss high and mighty, pardon me for caring. Just don’t come here to off load your frustrations, you are in charge of your overloaded schedule!”


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Sara Harricharan 12/01/06
Pretty good. Some grammatical errors. It was kind of sad that Anita didn't see what her sister did in 'volunteering'. But why did you end it so soon? I was expecting more! Otherwise-good job :)
Shanti Singh12/01/06
I really enjoyed your dialog. I could picture things so well. But I sure would have liked it to go longer!
Donna Emery12/02/06
An interesting exchange between the two sisters. I enjoyed the dialog also and could easily picture the scene. Good job.