The Official Writing Challenge
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There is nothing like the feeling of a mother's heart toward her children and the love and pain she feels for them. Well expressed.
11/27/06
Excellent emotion expressed here! The beginning was perfect - I could see the scene. I like what you said about the nurse. When you got to the ending - I was hoping for abit more??? Not sure - but over all - I could see that your writing is terrific and you really have talent for showing and not telling. :)