The Official Writing Challenge
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11/29/06
This is a sobering and thought-provoking message. Every parent leaves a legacy, but will it be for good or for evil in the lives of their children?

Your piece read smoothly except in a couple places,and you used very descriptive words.

Good work! :)
11/30/06
Wow! This was great reading. Very descriptive and thought-provoking. I loved the first paragraph best. Congrats and thanks for commenting on "Jacy's Motocycle Mom"
11/30/06
Leigh - this is just fabulous! Wonderful job, very descriptive, and I was really on the edge of my seat. You should write more poety - what a gift you have. Well deserved "Highly Commended" !!!