The Official Writing Challenge
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11/27/06
Good start, work on dialog grammar, and try to eliminate some of the !
Thanks for posting.
11/27/06
Lots of good things here. You delivered your message well and kept me reading from beginning to end. A few mechanical things, but nothing that can't be fixed. You have the basics down pat. Keep at it, your on the right track. God bless.