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I loved this story and its message! I could really relate to it because I was bullied and often rejected by kids all through school, and my older daughter also suffered through this in elementary school. It is a real problem and I applaud anyone who takes it seriously and addresses it!

I could see and feel with your little boy character; you made him come alive. Great job!
This is a good one.The detail was great.

There used to be a few people that teased me too. My Mom didn't stand for it. It helped it not to sink in really.
Good message that was delivered well. Keep up the good work. God bless.
This was well written and kept my attention throughout. Thanks for giving us a glimpse of a scene that is played out every day in our schools. The only criticism I have is it might be a little short on topic. Overall, though, it was a marvelous story.
Excellent detail throughout this story. I wish you had somehow woven your "point" more into the piece, rather than stating it at the end. This was a great description, though. Nice job!