The Official Writing Challenge
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11/24/06
Okay then.... You really got me there with the end. You kept my attention from the beginning to the end.
Congratulations with a impressive piece of work.
11/26/06
This is really, really good. I loved the writing style, loved the humour, loved the message - nothing I didn't love, in fact. Shouldn't be in beginners. I hope this does well.
11/26/06
This is so clever and fun and thoughtprovoking! The beginning part was just SO fun and amusing, and the end so profound. Wonderful job!
11/26/06
Excellent! I agree with the other posters. I smiled at the beginning and loved the ending. Very well done!
11/26/06
My mouth literally dropped open when I saw the last word.
I had to go back and read it again from that perspective. One (very minor) unneeded apostophre.
Awesome! Awesome!
11/27/06
Loved this! Very good read, excellent job!
08/24/09
very funny at the beginning and so touching at the end.