The Official Writing Challenge
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11/26/06
Excellent description. I would have loved to hear more detail on some of the more sombre times - they seemed a bit vague for me, and I had a bit of trouble relating (which was not a problem with the rest of it!). A wonderful portrait of two lives. Keep writing!
11/26/06
Very touching story of a relationship which went full circle. This touched my heart. Good work!