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Wonderful message here.
04/11/05
Wonderful article. You start with a question as to people die all alone and then supple the very wise, thought-provoking answer in the body of your work. Yes, you cannot become close with being willing to be vunerable. Yes, there may be a Judas or 2 in your life, but you open the possibilities of Johns, Peters, and Mary Magdelenes also. And they need your friendship as deeply as you need theirs. Very profound! I think your friends are very blessed.
04/11/05
I reread this twice trying to figure out why I liked it so much. I just do! It said so much.
I really like this. A lot of truth is contained within these lines. Thanks for putting it in such an eloquent, digestible manner.
I really liked how you brought out the vulnerability of forming friendships and how we must first develop a friendship with God and ourselves in order to thrive in a friendship with others. Good work!