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This was fun to read--especially in that New York (?) dialect! I could almost picture the folksy-wise narrator talking as she chased her kids around. Am not sure if "younguns" is more Southern than New York, though...and expected to see a "youse guys" or two in there!

I loved the word play on "parents" and "pair ents" and the message this conveyed.
Very creative!
I also enjoyed the word "pair-ent". This was very enjoyable and made me smile. Lots of fun to read. Good work!
I laughed, I cried...
Very enjoyable to read and original. Great job!