The Official Writing Challenge
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11/24/06
A very captivating story and it was very good to read. Nice job.
A little suspense and a nice surprise!I thought that the grungy old man was leading the father to Christ at first! I liked that he was an angel. Great writing. Keep it going!
11/29/06
Whoa! What an ending! This was great suspense. You held my attention all the way through, very realistic characters and a good ending. Great job!